Continuity Editing Exercise Draft

Here is a draft of my work which I have produced, the editing is not yet complete as there is a few things I need to change such as a few shots where the 180 degree rule was broken and a few shots that are not held still which we will be re filming. I also need to add my sound effects and music. Considering I have never used iMovie before, I think I done well at editing the footage we had filmed and adding necessary effects such as black and white on the flashback.
When I next edit for my final piece, I will be adding music, a bell sound effect and replacing the shots we are re-filming.